Art style is a solid 6/10, story is quite confusing, panels are hard to follow as everyone else is saying. Maybe go with less text per page and simplify the story. Other than that the comic is aight. Room for improvement, but not dog shit. Solid 6.22/10. Not at all on the level of our sacred A Night With Loona series tho. This has been the Jizoku Glazer.
Everything is better than helluva trio, that art style is weird asf. But I read that first half and though you was boutta say better than A Night With Loona. That would be a problem.
The comic's cool I guess. Transition to sex was really sudden, and I'm not personally a fan of the explicit cheating this comic has, but that's just a me thing. What's there is good, art's nice. Not bad overall
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Art style is a solid 6/10, story is quite confusing, panels are hard to follow as everyone else is saying. Maybe go with less text per page and simplify the story. Other than that the comic is aight. Room for improvement, but not dog shit. Solid 6.22/10. Not at all on the level of our sacred A Night With Loona series tho. This has been the Jizoku Glazer.
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Cant lie, Better art style than helluva trio
Everything is better than helluva trio, that art style is weird asf. But I read that first half and though you was boutta say better than A Night With Loona. That would be a problem.
Arts pretty good but I didnt really read it
I really don't feel like reading this shit. I've read enough Helluva Boss comics so I'll leave the rating to your imagination.
√-1/10
There was so much going on every panel it gave my adhd a hell of a ride
here you are
"Dogspin" is peak cinema
I read the title and I thought it said TAKE A SHIT
Guy makes decent porn but not so much of a story and scripting
Alright thats not bad, yeah thats pretty good.
This is how a night with loona started with me(it was confusing)
why rectal thermometer in ass scene wasnt drawn...
This obviously government propaganda to make us take thier shots so they can mind control us. Not cool government
Jews*
Damn government.
this some bullshit
Absolute blasphemy
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Could we be anymore confusing
what is even happening
Art, Fiyo... Art...
Not into it right now, but give it a week, I've liked this stuff before
The comic's cool I guess. Transition to sex was really sudden, and I'm not personally a fan of the explicit cheating this comic has, but that's just a me thing. What's there is good, art's nice. Not bad overall
This entire comic is a fucking fever dream
Who wants to help a brother grind JerkMate ranked?
Bet drop the user
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